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long dark lonely nights
waiting in vain
hurt, paranoid
mystified
will true love visit my single soul

still silent
imperfect thoughts running
blood rushing into my head
alone
blame it to my single soul

disgrace embracing me
once shattered
now and again feel dead
cold and frightened
who will save my single soul

crying for affection
wishing you to come
kiss all my pain good bye
take me into your heart
sing for my single soul
©2004-2009 ~prettyalcoholic
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the pain and fantasy of unrequited love

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:iconinsanity-streak:
Reminds me of one of the poems i wrote, also very expressive, i can totally identify with it, it seems very longing, very desperate, nice job

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Angel: Buffy
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:iconprettyalcoholic:
thanks! though this peice is very cheesy, lol, wanna also see your works.
:iconkei-creates:
Hmm....own experience? Well, we all are feeling it, one night or another.... GREAT JOB! :clap:
:iconladyblakeney:
I like the cadence ~ the rhymes flow freely. It isn't forced. Very good. :)
:icondreamlessnightmare:
seems like you want to rest in peace baby..lol

but it's nice..
:iconprettyalcoholic:
huh????? lol...

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hoy pinoy ako!
~cool club for brilliant writer..
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:iconsonicspaz101:
I love the way you wrote this. It's simple and amazing. I can DEFINETLY identify with it...it's beautiful
Sam

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Les brindilles et les pierres peuvent casser nos os, mais les mots casseront nos coeurs.
(thank you franky)

oh yeah...this is the coolest club for writers, personally, on D.A. :iconburn-p0etry:
:iconprettyalcoholic:
haha. thanks experience tells it all.

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hoy pinoy ako!
~cool club for brilliant writer..
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